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I live in Malaga, which is a city on the coast at the south of Spain. It has a population of 560 thousands people and it's the six biggest city in Spain. In the center of Malaga we can visit historic monuments such like the St. James Cathedral, the Roman theatre amongst others. It's a beautiful and a sunny city. You can also visit the house where Picasso born and the Picasso museum. Around the museum there're a lot of bars and wonderful restaurants which you can eat typical Spanish food, for example: paella, espeto, shrimp... There’s always a party atmosphere everywhere. The weather here is quite different with the north of Spain. In the summer , the weather can be very hot so people go to the beach a lot. The winter is colder but not too much and it doesn't usually rain in a long time . I think the best things about Malaga are the people, because they're very kindly and friendly.
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这里表示确切数字,thousand不能用复数。但是表示虚数的时候可以用复数,如thousands of。注意hundred, million, billion都是同样的用法。
没有such like这样的表达。把such去掉,或改为such as。
这句话放在这里跟前后的句子都没有联系。所以应该删掉。
表示持续一段时间用介词for。“in+一段时间”表示在一段时间之后。
应该是kind(形容词)。Kindly是副词。但是friendly是形容词。