Transition and Coherence (1)
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Read the following paragraph and answer the question: how does the writer
link all the sentences effectively?
¡¡¡¡Human blood serves the body in three important ways. First, blood carries
substances needed to maintain and repair body tissues. In this way, blood
serves as a provider. Secondly, blood also serves as a disposer, since
it carries wastes and gases away from the tissues of the body. In addition,
blood acts as a defender. The white corpuscles in the blood stream constantly
guard against and try to destroy bacteria and other agents that threaten
the body's welfare.
Just as you have noticed, the writer employs four ways to link his sentences:
- Use a pronoun to refer to a person, idea or thing just mentioned
in the
preceding sentences. Now examine the paragraph above and underline all
the pronouns.
- Repeat a key word or phrase in the preceding sentence, but not carry
it to the absurd degree that bores your reader. Please underline the
key word or phrase in the paragraph above.
- Use a synonym, a different word of much the same meaning as the one
used in the preceding sentence (in order to avoid too much repetition).
Identify the synonym of the phrase " serve as".
* A question for you that is so difficult
that you must struggle to answer: What's the function of the three methods?
Or what do they have in common? Your answer to the question is _______________.
- Use a transition word or phrase to point out the thought relationship,
or thread of thought, between sentences.
* Here are the transitional words commonly
used:
words that denote addition: and, again, also, too, besides, moreover,
furthermore, in addition, as well as
words that denote examples: for example, for instance, to illustrate,
take ¡as an example
words that denote comparison: similarly, in the same way, equally
important, likewise
words that denote contrast: in contrast, on the other hand, nevertheless,
yet, but, although, meanwhile, however
words that denote concession: of course, although, it's true,
though
words that denote result: therefore, consequently, so, as a result
words that denote time or order of importance: first(second,
third etc), now, before, after, next, then, later, once, finally, after
that, first of all, to begin with, more important, most important
words that denote conclusion: in conclusion, to conclude, to
sum up
These words are also called logic words because they show the logic
flow of thoughts between sentences.
* Tip: coherence
will be achieved if we employ the four methods correctly.
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