Descriptive Writing
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Narrative writing conveys to readers what happened to a writer, while
descriptive writing conveys to readers what a writer sees, hears, smells,
feels. In other words, descriptive writing appeals to the reader's senses.
There are basically two types of descriptive writing: objective (客观的)
and impressionistic (印象的). Objective description is a factual account
of the object the writer observes. The writer regards himself like a kind
of camera,recording and reproducing, though in words, a true picture.
Impressionistic description is very different. Focusing on the mood or
feeling the object evokes in the writer, rather than on the object as
it exists in itself, we may safely conclude that impressionistic description
seeks not to inform but to arouse emotion of readers.
Read the following two paragraphs and tell which one is objective
description and which one is impressionistic description.
1) Inside the house, in the very middle, there is an open courtyard
with tropical plants and flowers and even a wild parrot that can say
a few words and whistle. All around the courtyard is a kind of open
corridor or porch with pillars and a railing.
2) She was, in fact, a woman of forty, and she gave me the impression
of having more teeth, white and large and even, than were necessary
for any practical purpose.
In actual writing there is no clearly cut line between the two types
of description, as the following paragraph shows:
In the university where I teach, there is a lake with a name Rengong
Lake, which, translated, means man-made lake. Although having such an
unpoetic name, it's a place favored by all the students and faculty. It
lies there so peaceful; even the reflection of the rough rocks around
it seems so gentle. When the nights with a full moon come, sentimental
student poets stroll around the lake composing romantic poems.
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